What do you think of my first chapter?

to him self. It was a really pretty whistle much like a lullaby. He didn't seem to notice me at first until i walked up closer and the sound of my heals on the tiled floor got his attention. He looked up at me in surprise and put down the gl he had in his hand onto the bar. "Sorry miss this place is closed." The bold man said rudely frowning while pointing to the door. "oh, ill be on my way then, could you tell me where the nearest bar" i was interrupted by a laugh. I looked over to the pool table were a really good looking man sat. His bum placed on the pool table and his legs swinging below him. Even tho he was laughing his face was now serious as if he was angry with me for being here. His eyes had an evil look to them and his hands were shaking. I don't really remember how long i was staring for but i couldn't help my self. This guy was most probably the best looking man i have ever seen but he gave me a small chill down my spine. "are you deaf?" the bold man shouted. I have ne